Friday, January 29, 2021

Tramway Reviews #3: They Called us Enemy

Welcome back to the Tramway,

and welcome back to another entry of Tramway Reviews. This' a book I wanted to read for a long time, and I'm glad I finally got to it. I finished it Monday August 24th, 2020, and felt so inspired to write a review that I've written this before the (now published) second review in the series.

    Today, I will be reviewing "They Called Us Enemy," By George Takei, with Steven Scott, and art by Harmony Becker.

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They Called us Enemy cover. Ⓒ Penguin Random House, Cover used under fair use.

    "They Called us Enemy follows the story of George Takei's family as they're forced from their home during World War II to the Japanese Internment camps, that President FDR made legal with Executive Order 9066. The story follows the difficult decisions that Takei and other families had to make while behind barbed wire, facing racism around them.

    I love this book. It's one of the most important comics I've read. "They Called us Enemy" is in the genre of autobiography comics, and is as important as Art Spiegelman's "Maus." "They Called us Enemy" gives us a window into the past and one of America's darkest sins. We see the cruel living spaces, the dehumanizing effect of internment, and how the Japanese American community responded.

    One thing I learned from the book was that the US allowed some Japanese Americans to serve, albeit in a segregated unit, and they fought courageously in Europe against the Nazis. There's an irony of fighting for freedom for a country that stole yours away, preluding to the Vietnam War...

    Another thing I learned is that Japanese Americans could rescind their citizenship, though the motives behind the offer was racist. Essentially, America wanted to do a prisoner exchange with Japan for US citizens held by the Japanese Empire. In reality, Japanese Americans were extorted to rescind their citizenship to stay with their families in the camp, for fear of anti-Japanese Racism outside of the camps.

    Takei's story pulls at your heart. To continue, we move into minor spoilers for the biography. (Minor spoilers for the next two paragraphs)


Saturday, January 2, 2021

New Year's Resolutions & General Update

Welcome to the Tramway,

Hello readers. Thank you for reading today's post for Tug & Tram Blogging. Did you have a safe new year’s eve? I hope that, however you celebrated, you had a fun, but safe, time. 

Firstly, I want to give a big thank you to everyone who has read my Lady Luck novella preview. In case you missed my last post, as a Christmas Eve "gift" I published the first chapter of Lady Luck for FREE. You can still go read it, to get an idea of what the novella will look like.

While the project has another round of editing to go through, this time from my school's publication board (the Pinchpenny Press), I feel confident about the novella. Thanks as always to my friend and colleague Cristina Jantz of tidbitediting.com for her editing and feedback.

Moving on to our next topic, I've noticed that writers often post writer’s new year resolutions. Not wanting to miss out on the fun, here’s new year writing resolutions.

Thursday, December 24, 2020

Christmas Eve Book Preview: Lady Luck

 Welcome to Tug & Tram Blogging. 


Happy Holidays! Isn’t it insane to think a year has passed? Thank goodness and good riddance!


While I haven’t been able to post on here as often as I would have liked to, I appreciate you, dear readers, for sticking with me. I hope that next year is better for you and your families.


Today, I’d like to celebrate the holiday season, and reaching 2,500 followers on Twitter, with a chapter reveal! That’s right, here’s the first look at my senior project, Lady Luck (working title). 


Special thanks to Cristina Jantz, who helped to edit and provide feedback on the project. If you would like to work with Cristina, reach out to her on tidbitediting.com. Now, onto the chapter. 


Lady Luck

Chapter 1: The Jenkville Blitz

April 2, 1941

Brenda Banks stepped out of the limo in her red dress and matching heels. Her small black hat, complete with a feather and a veil, covered the left side of her face. Tonight was for dancing and having fun. She needed a break once in a while, and the Jenkville Lindyhop was the perfect place for doing just that.

Several young men smoking by the entrance in colorful zoot suits turned to stare at her. They cat-called and fanned themselves with their hats. 

Brenda ignored them until one tried to slap her rear. She grabbed his arm and pinned him to the ground. “Excuse me! Hands to yourself!”

The man swore at her. Brenda twisted his arm further.

“All right, all right! Sorry!” he blurted.

With a smirk, Brenda waltzed inside.


Hundreds of miles away, the Tokyo-Jenkville goods was stalled over the Pacific Ocean.

“Engine trouble,” the conductor reported. He opened a secret panel and pulled a red lever. 10 freight cars collapsed to reveal four gray German AR-197 biplanes and two zeppelin cabs. Crewmen marched from the rear cars into the zeppelins. 

A short man in a black SS uniform watched the operation. The zeppelins, the Graf, and the Amerika took to the air, each carrying two AR-197s.

You war profiteering’s come to haunt you, America, Commandant Grendel thought.


Brenda danced with different men all night. After rejecting five minks, three diamond rings, and a golden necklace, she escaped into the cool night air. 

Peecolo tapped the steering wheel as he waited outside. He was thoroughly startled when Brenda jumped through the rear open window, trying to avoid twelve more men. 

“Step on it!” she cried.

Peecolo roared away from the Jenkville Lindyhop. “Where to now, madam?” 

“Home.” Brenda leaned back against the seat and sighed. “Is this all my life is? Dancing, harassment by bachelors only looking for Father’s money, inheriting an empire?” 

Peecolo shook his head. He craned his neck to examine a shadow that had just appeared above them. “Odd! Isn’t that blimp a bit low?” 

Brenda opened up the sunroof. She could just make out a...red swastika?  

Then the first bomb dropped.

Brenda immediately closed the sunroof to avoid the shower of asphalt and glass. She and Peecolo screamed at the top of their lungs. 

“Hold on!” Peecolo slammed on the gas as more bombs hurtled toward Jenkville.

The AR-197s roared to the Navy dockyard. Before the alarm could be raised, they dropped four torpedoes. One struck the quayside, but the rest hit their target. The USS Jenkville’s cargo erupted in flames.

Peecolo swerved around a burning car, honking to alert the throng of people. Residents were setting up bucket brigades to save their homes. 

Brenda was glued to the window. “Wait! Stop!

Once the car skidded to a halt, Brenda ran to a Black police officer, who was tossing debris into the air.

“Peecolo, help us! There’s a kid under here!” Brenda pulled a terrified four-year-old from the rubble while the officer and Peecolo held up the debris. “It’s all right. You’re going to be okay.” 

“Carol? Carol?!” a nearby woman shrieked. 

“She’s over here, madam!” Peecolo shouted. 

The woman ran up and took her daughter from Brenda. “Oh, sweetheart!” She turned to Peecolo and Brenda. “Thank you!” 

“Thank you both. I appreciate it,” the officer said. “But you’d best head for safety.”

Brenda stared up at the blimps. You monsters will pay for what you’ve done.



Want to know what happens next? Stay tuned! Lady Luck will be released in the Spring of 2021.


Thank you for reading. What did you think of Chapter 1? Let me know on my social media pages. The links are available on the right hand bar. Thank you again, and I’ll see you on the Tramway.

Sunday, October 4, 2020

October Update: Editing, Page Counts, & Classes

Hello everyone,

welcome back to the Tug & Tram Blogging. I hope that you all are doing well during this very stressful year. As you can see, it has been a while since I have posted. If you follow me on Twitter, you'll know that I have been taking a bit of a break for my mental health, and to focus on school. 

    Today, I'm working on my senior project (more below) at my college's library. There's an awesome view of the fountain, which I took. (You can see more photos like this on my Instagram, see the credits at the end)


    I'm taking a short break, and felt like now was a good time to give you all some updates on my life and writing.

    Life has been hectic, in particular because of the year we're living in. I have been keeping my grades up, and I'm adjusting well to apartment life. There has been hard times, but I've gotten through them, with thanks to my counselor. 

    Is it October already? Where has the time gone? I can't believe that the semester is almost over already. Like many colleges, mine has had to adapt to stay open. For us, part of that means we're closing earlier, and not having any breaks. Which means that I have less time to get my senior project finished.
    
    I freaked out about the length, and elements I was concerned were underdeveloped. However, thanks to help from my advisor and editor (thanks again Cristina!!) we're working on cutting the length down. The current goal, which my advisor recommended, 75 pages. 

    Now, bare in mind that my first draft was 124 pages, and the trimmed down version is 100, which is a very rough 100 pages roughed down (with chapters and characters chopped out). However, once I started working on Draft 3 today, its starting to come together. 

    It certainly won't be a single person job. If I've realized anything on my senior project, it's how much collaborative writing projects are. Without my editor and feedback, I wouldn't be able to complete the project. I have also realized I have a lot more to learn regarding writing, and I hope to continue learning. I'm ready to learn, and hope to continue improving. Thanks to everyone whose helped along the way, or offered encouragement. 

    Before I wrap up, I want to talk about the blog a bit. I'd like to say I'll be able to go back to a regular schedule, unfortunately, the semester is only going to get busier. Another problem is, when I move home, I won't have internet again (unless I can help my Mom get that set up and paid for). So once the semester ends, I may go quiet again. I will try and post when I can, though when I will post again is uncertain.

    I hope that you will stick around, and thank you to those who have. Question for my fellow writers, have you ever had to trim down a project before? How much did you end up trimming? And for non writers, what's the longest you've worked on a project?

    Thanks for reading. If you wish to follow me on social media, you can find me on TwitterFacebook and Instagram. If you'd like to connect with me professionally, please consider connecting on LinkedIn, mention that you came from Tug & Tram Blogging. 

    Special thanks again to Cristina Jantz for helping me edit my project. If you would also like to get editing feedback from Ms. Jantz, go to tidbitediting.com 

    Thank you all for reading, and I'll see you on the Tramway.

Sunday, August 30, 2020

Tramway Reviews #2: March by John Lewis

Hey folks, 

before we begin, I'd like to dedicate this post to the late Congressman John Lewis, and Chadwick 

Boseman. We lost two great people this year, and let us not forget to keep fighting for equality in all 

fields, entertainment and in our government. Rest in Power gentlemen, rest in power.